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 [Slack] has a couple of useful keyboard shortcuts for navigating between unread
-channels. Unfortunately these use an awkward combination of keys involving
+channels. Unfortunately they use awkward combinations of keys involving
 multiple modifiers and an arrow key (<span class="keyboard-shortcut">⌥⇧↓</span>
-and <span class="keyboard-shortcut">⌥⇧↑</span>). Additionally, these shortcuts
-are not exposed in the menu bar. This means they can't be modified with the
-[built-in support for custom shorcuts in Mac OS X][custom-shortcuts].
+and <span class="keyboard-shortcut">⌥⇧↑</span>). If these shortcuts were
+exposed in the menu bar they could be modified using the [built-in support for
+custom shortcuts in Mac OS X][custom-shortcuts]. As an alternative the
+following [Karabiner] config can be used to change the next unread shortcut to
+something more sane. I chose <span class="keyboard-shortcut">⌘J</span>:
 
 [Slack]: https://slack.com/
+[Karabiner]: https://pqrs.org/osx/karabiner/
 [custom-shortcuts]: https://support.apple.com/kb/PH18418
 
-I made a feature request for this to be addressed. Until that happens, if at
-all, the following [Karabiner] config can be used to change the next unread
-shortcut to something more sane. I chose <span
-class="keyboard-shortcut">⌘J</span>:
-
 <script src="https://gist.github.com/wezm/05210d76660e735944a7.js"></script>
 [View Code][code]
 
-[Karabiner]: https://pqrs.org/osx/karabiner/
 [code]: https://gist.github.com/wezm/05210d76660e735944a7